When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, when people choosing a job, people is always focus the wage and this is the most important part. I agree with this argument and this essay will support that argument.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of salary is the most important consideration. First, government subsidies for workers are believed to equalize job opportunities among people regardless of their family background. In this modern life, have many technology devices such as mobile phone, tablets or computers. A high income guarantees a high standard quality of life, in which the people can afford their increasing demand on not only human basic needs to but also luxuries things such as brand new accessories or overseas holiday. This high salary support, presumably tends not only to increase the overall opportunities rate of lower-income people but also to mitigate their feeling of inferiority, which eventually promotes and egalitarian society. Second, higher salary would probably result in a greater supply of highly qualified workers, which benefits society in the long run. In fact, it is acknowledged that skilled and salary is imperative to foster economic growth and technological development in any nations.
Nevertheless, the resultant problem would be far more significant than the minor benefits once people just focus on salary. First, all people thinks salary is important conditions would likely correspond with a tremendous financial strain on a country. Everyone just focus on salary but they don’t hard work and don’t have skilled, people could become over-reliant on the state budget for funding, meaning that there would be less input to develop other important areas such as the healthcare system and transport infrastructure. Second, people think salary is important conditions would tempt many young people including those who are not academically inclined or show no interest in work pursuits, thereby adding great burdens for company admissions and enrollment staff and potentially wasting time that these young people could have spent pursuing more suitable salary paths. It, instead, would be a more salary viable option if the resources were focused on supporting people work hard and less privileged yet gifted people.
In conclusion, it is certainly the true that the salary is the most important in job selections of many people, but this is no mean suitable for everyone and making career paths.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39736842105 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79175056034 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.1410067971 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.733333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157048403442 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633613449963 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638874279031 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120919591159 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433738634381 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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