Every day, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem?
Nowadays, food sources is not a important problem in developed countries in the world. So, millions of tons of food are not saved for any purposes. In contrast, it is crucial for some regions in developing countries. To keep balance, we need to find solution to against this issue
Eating food is not only help to exist but also create desirable atmosphere and adapt aesthetic needs. For instance, the rich who enjoy their meal in luxurious restaurants, choose the place due to delicious taste and beautiful food decoration and definitely the food is complicated with a lot of stage. Furthermore, if those restaurants want to keep ingredient fresh, they absolutely wasting ingredients and cooked food every single day. Furthermore, some countries can not bring their product to the oversea which leads to a superabundance in domestic market.
To solve it, the globalization must be strongly promoted to open a mighty development in import and export. It considerably help to develop the goods exchanging all over the world. Besides, the government need to focus on agriculture in difficult areas by inviting agricultural experts to regenerate soil and indicate suitable crops for the place.
In conclusion, people set a great amount of request for what they eat and a restriction of international food exchanging are some typical reason why the food is wasted. In order to help miserable situations and respect the food, strengthening globalization and concentrating on agriculture are the solutions for deprived areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s not only help to exist but also create desirable atmosphere and adapt aesthetic...
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Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ients and cooked food every single day. Furthermore, some countries can not bring their pro...
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...t in import and export. It considerably help to develop the goods exchanging all ove...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27572016461 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11155743962 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637860082305 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7892441205 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201836509288 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671498016548 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482712337586 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108319261601 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472467968801 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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