A growing number of people feel that animal should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Many people believe that we should not take advantage of animals, they ought to be granted the same equality as humans. While someone has a different viewpoint that animals must be exploited for the demands of humans like food and study. To me, animals are like a friend because we live in the common house.
On the one hand, animals play an important role in maintaining biodiversity and the biosphere as they also are a part of life on earth. Moreover, they decrease the spreading of forest fires because plant-eating animals reduce the amount of grass that can fuel fires through grazing. Besides, they enhance the health and fertility of the soil through their feces and urine which contribute to the needs of agriculture instead of using chemical substances. Especially, researches have shown that the connection between people and animal even can decline feelings of loneliness and anxiety. Although animals have been having a great contribution, they still have been killed for beneficial purposes and science experiments. For instance, animals suffer painful torments such as skinning and sawing horns to meet the needs of the fashion industry. It is cruel of humans to do so.
On the other hand, animals are a plentiful source of protein-is crucial nutrition for human beings. Furthermore, animals are ideal test objects for scientific research as they have a similar structure to humans, and experiments are risky. For example, Covid 19 vaccine creators tested their products several times on some animals before applying them to individuals to make sure the vaccine is safe for humans. It is undeniable that the living income of almost people who lives near the coast relies on fishing as it is one of the developing industries.
To sum up, animals are a partner of humans to keep life on earth continuously so they are observed to have their rights. Although we can not completely end the inequality of animals like being forced for human needs, we definitely reduce the inhumane acts to protect animal also our natural world
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06213017751 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65404404479 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582840236686 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8716788532 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.9375 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403603722932 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121952707849 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603292442448 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239413481843 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388053186419 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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