Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs such as heroin and cocaine, yet they allow people to buy drugs such as tobacco and alcohol. Laws that prohibit the sale and use of hard drugs should be applied to all drugs, including tobacco and alcohol.
What is your opinion?
There is no doubt that the buying and selling of different hard drugs such as heroin and cocaine is prohibited around the world. Yet, mild intoxicants like tobacco and alcohol are being allowed to consume. In my opinion, any type of material when consumed causes harm to health or make addiction of it should be prohibited by the enforcement of laws.
To begin with, the first reason to ban nicotine based product such as tobacco and alcohol is due to the fact that these things can cause addiction. For example, there are so many people around the globe have reportedly said that they are unable to quit the usage of such product. Moreover, the research have shown that due to peer pressure and life related issues most of the people indulge in these addictions. The same effect can be seen with the consumption of hard drug like heroin and cocaine.
The next reason not to tolerate the usage of such intoxicants is because they have extreme detrimental effects in health of a person. To illustrate, there are various studies which have shown that fatal disease like lung cancer and liver failure are prominent in the people who consume tobacco and alcohol respectively.
To conclude, without considering any kind of monetary benefit, the administrations all round the world should ban tobacco and alcohol because they causes health issues and addiction in people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...ld ban tobacco and alcohol because they causes health issues and addiction in people. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, kind of, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96103896104 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5232339902 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5544497858 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.6 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327472157607 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121627423832 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725348429032 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182347666118 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755677804791 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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