The Pie chart gives information about the country of birth of people living in Australia
The chart above displays the number of birth from any countries in Australia while the table shows the location of citizent live in several countries. Interestingly though, it is measured in percentage. At first glance, it was evident that more than a half of chart was people who are native persons and the highest percentage was reached by China which was almost all of the inhabitants occupied in city while the upper number of rural areas was gained by New Zealand.
Moving to a more detailed analysis concerning to the pie diagram, Australian had the highest percentage, it was just over three quarter whereas 14% was obtained by persons who born in others but in other hand United Kingdom achieved a half of percentage in other places. However, under one in twenty was counted by three countries, there are New Zealand, China, and Netherland.
Turning to the data in the table, all the countries had a very large majority of citizents prefer to live in the city while people that live in rural areas of New Zealand and Australia were around a fifth while Netherland and other places were approximately one in ten. Finally, China gained the lowest percentage was just 1%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 366, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...e was reached by China which was almost all of the inhabitants occupied in city while the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84653465347 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57772519666 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564356435644 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.0444265183 43.030603864 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.857142857 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148370390032 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665254528681 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873824707643 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10392673051 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058551512736 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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