Health and wellness is a growing concern for a number of people across the globe Some people believe a well balanced diet and exercise routine is the best way to stay healthy Others suggests that good health has less to do with what you eat and more to do | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Health and wellness is a growing concern for a number of people across the globe. Some people believe a well balanced diet and exercise routine is the best way to stay healthy. Others suggests that good health has less to do with what you eat and more to do with how you live. In other words maintaining positive relation with friends and family is the best way to remain healthy.
Which opinion do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

No one can deny the fact that health is a major concern of today’s world. In the given scenario, some people believe that in order to stay healthy good food and work out is a key factor. However, other opine that how is your living style has a lot more to do with your health rather than your diet. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that for anyone to remain fit, it is essential to take care of their proper diet as well as their fitness activity. I feel this way for several reason which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.

To start with, healthy body acquire a healthy food that contains all the diet crucial for a body . To be more precise, over consumption or under consumption of food both are detrimental for our health. I have witnessed this from my own personal experience. One year back I used to over consume food which I like the most that is processed food , fast food etc and do not even dare to touch the food which I hate to eat that is mostly organic ones . This unhealthy habit of mine results in obesity deteriorating my health. As a result, I became sick for a month and finally came to the realization that healthy eating habit plays a vital role in our body.

Next, undoubtedly exercise is a key element for us to stay healthy for a lifetime. In addition, if we manage to do some work out in a daily basis then we need not to spend hours and hours in a gym and eventually we end up burn calories easily. For instance, running or doing any sort of activity that indulge our body movement makes us very energetic and enthusiastic. This action aid us to remain fit and healthy throughout our life. Therefore, we can easily conclude that how important is exercise in our daily life for us to stay healthy.

All things considered, when it comes to our health and healthy life, a proper diet and physical exercise is always welcoming. One should not take their life for granted and should be mindful of the things that are beneficial for their well being.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 467, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...r fitness activity. I feel this way for several reason which I will explore in the subsequent ...
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Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...contains all the diet crucial for a body . To be more precise, over consumption or...
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Line 4, column 344, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...h I like the most that is processed food , fast food etc and do not even dare to t...
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Line 4, column 447, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... hate to eat that is mostly organic ones . This unhealthy habit of mine results in...
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Line 6, column 164, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spend'?
Suggestion: spend
...k out in a daily basis then we need not to spend hours and hours in a gym and eventually...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, sort of, as a result, as well as, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43989071038 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45339338619 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9998184454 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2777777778 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273641901139 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783343985394 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434915344487 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160833774783 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065117616726 0.0645574589148 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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