International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
Around the world, the tourism industry has proved beneficial for different places by not only generating good revenue but also creating employment opportunities. Although international tourism has negative influences on local inhabitants and the environment, I still believe that the pros and cons are considered the merits of tourism surpass the demerits.
On the one hand, international tourism is advantageous in many ways. First and foremost, the tourism industry contributes to revenue generation for nations because the more tourists visit, the more profits nations earn. As a result, governments can deal with unemployment and inflation by creating employment in services, such as accommodation, transport, or entertainment. Moreover, the possibilities of cash they obtain can be used and rotated inside the country.
It seems to me that the trend of developing international tourism has many drawbacks, such as the environment and local citizens.
On the other hand, I still believe that the development of international tourism has many drawbacks, such as local people and the environment. The first reason is that unaware visitors intentionally throw rubbish away everywhere in lieu of putting them in public containers giving rise to natural creatures and endangered animals on the verge of disappearance. Nevertheless, as many people are dependent on the tourism business, there are times when tourists are not visiting and the local people find difficulty in earning money for a living then.
In conclusion, international tourism has its positive and negative impacts but the merits like more income and employment overshadow the demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.628 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23122020296 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1614438864 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.909090909 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304098223272 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12513655006 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102143735786 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182875664745 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439916571211 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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