you recently did a short cookery course, the cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.
write a letter to the course director at the school school. in your letter
- describe what you enjoyed about the course
- say how much cooking you have done since the course
- suggest another cookery course you would like the school to offer
Dear sir or madam, I wrote this letter to inform my experienced of short cookery course. In this essay, I would inform a feedback who you asked to me about your course. After taking part of your lessons, I got a lot of new things and development of my skill which need to apply job in future.
The subject is useful to help me to improve cooks skill and sometime I practice it to new food form abroad country such as from Asian and western food. Previously, I did not know to much about ingredient and after joining your course I can discriminate every single taste.
But sometimes, the lesson concerned ingredient and main food. Another option, you can provide a variety of food such as desert, cake or anything sweet food. It was important that many store bakery look for an applicant which has a experienced about skill of making cake or cookies.
- Mrs Barret an English speaking woman who lives in your town has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer 56
- you recently attended a meeting at a hotel when you returned home you found had left some important at the hotel 73
- The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared
- some people like to try new things for example places to visit and types of food Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with 56
- during a recent job plane journey you sat next to businessman who owns a chain of restaurants you talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one oh his restaurant write a letter to this businessman in your letter re 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ent of my skill which need to apply job in future. The subject is useful to help me to i...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...estern food. Previously, I did not know to much about ingredient and after joining...
^^
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... bakery look for an applicant which has a experienced about skill of making cake ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 700.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54545454545 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46335942415 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662337662338 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4954541697 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195745923546 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780946753607 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718207339711 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116312012258 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524303703987 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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