As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate

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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate

Technology is by far the greatest invention on planet earth. We are dependent on Technology for various purposes in our everyday life.But the question that we all often dwell upon ourselves is that “is this technology going to be malevolent in the upcoming future or not?”The prompt regards this fact that as we as human beings start to rely on tech more and more, our ability to think will decrease. I, in fact, moderately disagree with this prompt and I tend to believe and state that technology will surely lessen our work both mentally and physically but it can’t reduce our innovative thinking capabilities because of the following two reasons.
Humans as a group stand apart from different mammals because of our cognitive abilities and understanding of the convoluted world.Our capabilities of using brain power has lead to numerous inventions and discoveries, that once upon a time were seeming too farfetched to imagine.Thus,this leads me to my point that human brains will always be required to update technology and invent new things. For example ,in 20th century,we witnessed several noteworthy technical inventions. But they were not as efficient as they are today,in 2023.Trained Professionals and scientists have worked on these technologies for a long time to make them as prominent and proficient as they are nowadays. Hence, it can be inferred that technology might be developed but human thinking will always be required to maintain it.

Development and deployment of these technological services has surely lessened our work. Although there is no technology that can match levels of human thinking. For example, Everything majorly successful today is a result of a minute imagination which was too novice and uncomfortable for lots of people back then. People filled with determination often became iconoclasts to fulfil their dream and finally invented or discovered unbelievable things. Thus my point comes into light that it doesn’t matter how intelligent technology gets in future,our creativity and passion will always be unique and all this can be stated and proved by our diurnal experiences which are pragmatic in themselves.
Ofcourse, some argue that this increasing reliance on technology will lead to unemployment and less human involvement . But, Isn’t that ease the exact thing we craved for when we created technology?This leads me to present my conclusion that in the forthcoming future,technology will get more powerful.Thus to compete and stay in line one must learn and gather better cognitive skills.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, so, then, thus, well, apart from, as to, for example, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36972704715 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08619594822 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602977667494 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.542717461 60.3974514979 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.571428571 118.986275619 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7857142857 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278495075687 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925884794859 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540718198605 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174564204526 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455385149084 0.0667264976115 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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