Pop stars earn much more than classical music performers. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
it is believed by many individuals that pop stars earn more than classical music performers, whereas others ponder that it is not fair.I agree with former. I will discuss both sides with relevant examples in the following paragraph.
To begin with, there are the many reasons why people believe that pop stars will earn more than classical music is true. Primarily, pop music is become very famous because of the latest technology which helps them to create some new tunes and beats, it gives the audience to enjoy more loud sound especially young people around the world. For example, loud music will give you more pleasure or enjoyment in house parties or in pubs.Apart from this, nowadays youngsters prefer to go to the parties more often in a weekends than staying in home.in order to stay in a contact with their friends and maintain some dignity in the society. Thus, it proves useful to this age group.
In the contrary, the classical music has more advantage like, you feel every part of the music and also feel some peace. Firstly, it will helps you to reduce some stree and make you comfortable while listening to it. For instance, the instruments which used in classical music were very old when music was invented back then. For example, harmonium and flute are the primary instruments were you will get the good tunes. Apart from this , old people like this old music or classical music than pop music, they believe that classical music is best when it comes to comparison.So everyone has their own perception towards the music.
In the conclusion, after taking the aforesaid into the consideration, from my perspective, although there are many differences in choosing the good music, pop up or classical music, the pop up music is loved by many young people around globe and later as a youngster I prefer to listen pop up more than a classical music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, then, thus, whereas, while, apart from, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81619937695 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46010566903 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526479750779 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0861000536 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.833333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305847971157 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118055177652 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729187615136 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199177191229 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021050713636 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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