How social media benefit people?
How can social media benefit people?
Connectivity is among the most significant benefits of social media. It can link countless users anytime, anywhere. In the past, people waited for a letter or meet each other from faraway after a long time, but nowadays people can communicate easily. Furthermore, they can solve their problems from long distances. Social media has many benefits which are mentioned below.
Fundamentally, social media can help doctors. The best operations have been done via social media. Imagine that the patient has a bad condition. In the meantime, the specialist doctor is in another country, so they can’t wait. Consequently, they operate via social media. Social media bridges that gap and connects doctors to their patients. The fact that doctors performed that operation from long-distance could save the life of that patient.
Moreover, not only can doctors exploit this, but also students can take advantages of this. Recently, during Covid-19- an epidemic that killed almost ten million people around the world- all people were locked down, so students were learning via Zoom or another application. It is better than being home and stressing about their lessons. Teachers also made money from this.
Have you ever made friends via social media? Most of us have a best friend whom we have never ever seen or met, but we always get in touch with her. The point is here that they can understand us preferably than other friends around us.
In a nutshell, the world proved that people can use social media in a good way. It is true that some juniors use it for wasting their time, for instance when you check Tik-tok you will get rid of that one or two-hour latter but we can justice all people. I suggest that use it more in a good way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...suggest that use it more in a good way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91029900332 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44773628038 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9752286246 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2608695652 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0869565217 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47826086957 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365776875418 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132170410504 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.193537551803 0.0737576698707 262% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268636475215 0.150856017488 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.273532386811 0.0645574589148 424% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.31 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.