In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment.
What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?
In many countries, despite achieving high qualifications, many graduated students are currently struggling to get employed. This problem is result from numerous factors and there are some suggestions to solve the situation.
The first reason to this problem is lack of soft skills among students which are necessary for work. A large number of students dedicate their time in university for deepening their specialised knowledge rather than updating skills like teamwork, critical thinking, analyzing. Therefore, although they have the advantage of a high degree for their knowledge, they may not win a chance to get a job due to their lack of skills.
The second reason to be mentioned is that not all of working areas are well-developed in each country. For example, a student with a qualification related to Economy is able to find a job anywhere while that to Science has limited choice without some countries like the USA. Or it is easier to get a job in the areas of Finance, Business, Trade in a nation which economy is strong than that having depression.
There are some solutions to improve the situation. First, students should not only maintain their study in university but also learn new skills to meet the demand from employers. It will help graduated students increase the chance to get a position with both high qualifications and skills. Second, universities can be a connector between firms and students. This will help both students find a job which is suitable for their major and employers get their appropriate workers. Last but not least, students can take working overseas into account where has suitable environment. It will avoid working in unwanted area and wasting their talents.
In conclusion, unemployment among highly qualified students in some contries can be caused by lack of soft skills or ill development in specific working areas. To solve the problems, some suggestions for changes from both students and universities are given.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
... students which are necessary for work. A large number of students dedicate their time in univers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2125 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85150727686 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8460777556 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1176470588 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138855151264 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459924380338 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449262496406 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089278974737 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478463288326 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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