As major cities in the world are growing today, so do their problems. What are problems for young people who are living in the cities as the result of continued growth? What are solutions for these problems?
The fact that major cities all over the world are growing leads to the growth of problems. There are numerous issues confronting the young residences in these cities and going along with are solutions.
Young people living in continuingly growed cities face amount of problems. The first one to be named is unemployment. As the population of the cities is exceeding, so is the competiveness in working market. Young people must compete with others who have more advantages such as higher degree, more working experiences, etc for limit of job positions. The second issue is financial burden. Major cities have high living cost. The young who are short in earning and have no support may have difficulties in maintaining that high cost. The situation would even worsen if they are jobless.
To deal with the above problems, there should be some solutions. Firstly, the goverment should take some actions to help the young finding jobs more easily and maintaining their living like opening job affair, reducing tax for star-ups and so on. Secondly, the young should take extra courses to gain more knowledge and experience to have higher chance in working competition.
In conclusion, the continued growth of major cities brings about issues like unemployment and burden of finance in young people. However, some measures from government and the young themselves are also recommened.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19196428571 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66720430313 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566964285714 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0568170006 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5333333333 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9333333333 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254054641994 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851828872161 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775064740344 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156795613677 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539225277302 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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