Task 2: What are problems for young people who are living in the cities as the result of continued growth? What are solutions for these problems?
It is true that the rapid development of big cities have brought several problems for the young inhabitants. Thus, different measures should be also adopted to tackle these phenomena.
Raised in the period of city growth, youngsters have to cope with many issues. In terms of career prospects, the development of cities means the migration of the workforce from rural areas is promoted, which leads to a dramatic increase in the population. As a result, the availability of well-paid jobs tends to become impossible for young people, which makes them find more difficulties in shouldering an ever-growing financial burden, regarding renting accommodation and taking care of their families. From the entertaining perspective, it is also obvious that during formative years, playing areas are of paramount importance for the physical development of children. Nonetheless, the massive speculation on high-rise buildings and towering skyscrapers as a result of the economic revolution has greatly reduced the available spaces for the construction of more free playgrounds and sport centers, which prevent young people from participating in regular exercise. Consequently, they have increasingly suffered from numerous health problems due to the frequent usage of social networks on the Internet.
Therefore, national and local authorities should employ different solutions to regulate this phenomenon. Firstly, resources should be allocated to give young people more job opportunities. More vocational courses should be also promoted to provide the young unemployed with a competitive edge and job prospects. Secondly, it is also necessary to introduce restrictions on construction planning to reduce unnecessary buildings and provide more areas for playing area and leisure activities. Finally, educational institutions also play a crucial role in raising awareness of doing exercises and reducing sedentary activities among young people.
In conclusion, many detrimental consequences can stem from the rapid growth of major cities and the government should implement different policies to minimize these negative impacts on youngsters in their cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...age of social networks on the Internet. Therefore, national and local authoritie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as for, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84126984127 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15288763332 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612698412698 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6021193974 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.428571429 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205306970097 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672414708447 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498406537368 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126161919016 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522350385994 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.99 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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