Task 2. Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is a widespread belief that young people should pursue their studies at university and college in order to move up to a career ladder. Nonetheless, other people also argue that finding a job after school is a better way to get ahead in life. As far as I am concerned, I firmly believe that continuing to study after higher school education is much better.
On the one hand, getting a job after graduating from high school may possess some notable benefits. The first advantage is that people can earn money as soon as possible. In some developing countries, many youngsters find difficulty in pursuing higher studies due to their lack of affordability. Thus, earning a living immediately after school is the only way to shoulder the ever-growing financial burden regarding daily consumption and transportation. Moreover, those who choose to get a job instead of continuing to study in college or university are likely to progress rapidly in their career. It is also obvious that this selection can also provide more opportunities for young people to obtain more practical experiences or skills to run their own businesses.
On the other hand, I would also believe that continuing education after high school can endow young people with numerous advantages. Firstly, a university education will provide people with high qualifications, which is what many enterprises expect today. Furthermore, nowadays, university graduates tend to receive much higher salaries compared to those without a university education. Secondly, the job market is becoming more and more competitive. Hence, in order to possess a more competitive edge, individuals have to prove their superior strength compared to other candidates, and a Bachelor's or Master’s degree is one of the most reliable confirmations of their competence.
In conclusion, although both working right after school and choosing to continue higher education are beneficial in their own ways, it seems to me that it is much better the pursuing further study at college or university before finding a job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a bachelor' or simply 'Bachelors'?
Suggestion: a bachelor; Bachelors
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...able confirmations of their competence. In conclusion, although both working rig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27051671733 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99597386918 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1774497734 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.6 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293062537099 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102243269331 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705105334668 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206449548762 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772335054038 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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