What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice
For Saudi Arabia, the discovery that led to the greatest change was the discovery of oil. Oil was first found eighty years ago by a group of American geologists and Bedouins who knew how to navigate their way in the desert using the position of stars. The unearthing of these oil wells has dramatically changed the economy and lifestyle of people dramatically ever since.
A few years after finding the oil wells, Saudi Arabia became the world's largest exporter of oil. Now, the majority of Saudi Arabia's income depends on oil exports. Not long before, the Kingdom relied on income received from pilgrims and the farming of dates. People lived in mud houses as bedouins. The breadwinner of the family would go abroad leaving their families behind in search for jobs that could allow them to meet daily needs. Now, Saudi Arabia is among the top thirty richest countries in the world.
The advent of oil exports from Saudi Arabia also changed the country’s international relationship, as countries like the USA, China and Russia depended on oil from Saudi Arabia. KSA is now one of the members of the G20 as well
Besides these improvements, we also saw a change in the infrastructure of the country. This was initially done to allow efficient extraction of oil but as the national income increased, the money was spent to improve the overall infrastructure of the country, with proper roads and bridges. Improved housing, increased job opportunities as well as improved education were also the result of oil exports. Now, as oil dependence is reducing and the fear of oil depletion looms on the head of the government, the country uses its strong economic position and good international relationships to focus on other areas that the Kingdom can invest in for the future.
To sum up, the discovery of oil has completely changed Saudi Arabia. As the economy improved, so did the country’s infrastructure and people’s lifestyle. It gave rise to many job opportunities as well. The country now uses the income from oil exports to finance future projects when oil shortage becomes a problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98863636364 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76885324556 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542613636364 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 11.0 3.08781362007 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6148128055 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5555555556 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.089755578298 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034805544841 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313599162131 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619262033127 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262993863573 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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