Major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in those cities are facing? Suggest some solutions
Owing to a quick increase in both the challenges and the size of the world's largest cities, the young must deal with a variety of problems and solutions should be provided to address them.
The two biggest difficulties that young people have to cope with are high cost of living and lack of job opportunities. Firstly, many cosmopolitics cities have a high cost of living, which can make it difficult for young people to find affordable housing, pay for education, and cover basic living expenses. This makes it difficult for young people to save money, especially if they are on entry-level salaries or working in low-paid jobs. Secondly, although a range of job opportunities are offered in metropolis, competition for those jobs are more likely to be fierce. Many young people may struggle to find meaningful work, particularly if they lack the necessary skills or experience. For example, a recent college graduate who has only worked part-time jobs throughout their studies may find it difficult to secure a full-time job in their chosen field. Without relevant work experience, employers may be hesitant to hire them for higher-level positions.
To address these problems, several possible solutions could be implemented. The first measurement would be governments can allocate national budget to provide cheap accommodation for young people. This could include building more economical dwelling units or offering financial assistance for those who are struggling to pay rent. Another possible solution should be investing in education and training programs can help young people develop the skills and experience they need to compete for jobs in the city.
In conclusion, there are various problems entailing this trend, and steps need to be taken to tackle those issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the largest'.
Suggestion: worlds the largest
...both the challenges and the size of the worlds largest cities, the young must deal with a vari...
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Line 3, column 855, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
... secure a full-time job in their chosen field. Without relevant work experience, empl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32508833922 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85732693214 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593639575972 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6350057153 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.923076923 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168700681624 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598804819155 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376956765438 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104419803724 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213908330319 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.