Major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in those cities are facing? Suggest some solutions.
In recent times, more and more people are migrating to cities from the countryside. Although urbanisation are expanding all the time, due to greater employment opportunities and a higher standard of living. There are some social problems which affects the lives of every person living there. This essay will examine some of the problems in detail, and then propose solutions.
To begin with, metropolis areas are very expensive and there is a huge crowds. One of the major troubles faced by human beings living there is high stress level. Due to high pressure of work, they tend to have not a single minute for themselves and they fall into the lazy habits and they skip exercises and commence to eat junk foods that worsen their situation. Also many humans suffer from lack of job opportunities. Many businesses offer job to different stream person rather from the same stream. For instance, a banker gives opportunities to science field but not to commerce one, other field individual faces difficulty to acquire job. Another issue is traffic and pollution. Because of huge public living in municipality areas every humankind take their vehicles on road their appear lot of traffic and pollution cause by cars fumes and more and more people are suffering from respiratory disease such as asthma.
Subsequently, the solution for these problems are the government and organisations should take steps to reduce working hours. Another mixture is to have low rent prices so that the person can save money for their future and health. Furthermore, government should take initiative measure to lessen the vehicles on road, mankind should travel more in public transport.
To conclude, there are multiple problem in most cities and even there are solutions for it. Government should have regulations for this problems so that young generation cannot suffer from health consequences at the very young age.
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Suggestion: some
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'crowd'?
Suggestion: crowd
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...junk foods that worsen their situation. Also many humans suffer from lack of job opp...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17475728155 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63551255256 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595469255663 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7045325189 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0588235294 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213493599151 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638143663413 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671319149331 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136587912626 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656162760744 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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