The use of Ecstasy, a dangerous dance drug, has increased alarmingly in the world over the past decades among high school seniors. What do you think is the cause of this situation ? And what measures can be taken to prevent it
Ecstasy consumption is one of the alarming problems that society has to face over the past decades, especially among high school seniors. There are many reasons why this issue has increased rapidly and measurements should be taken seriously to prevent it as soon as possible. I can identify three main causes, and three broad solutions, which we will describe now.
Perhaps the main cause is the lack of knowledge and awareness of students about the dangers of this attractive substance, the short-term and long-term effects it will bring. Some students do not think thoroughly before deciding to try Ecstasy, they keep in mind that they would only do it once and quit, or some others want to show themselves off, thinking it would be cool, these phenomena lead to a high increase in the use of this dance drug. Another factor may frequently be the careless, loose education of family, meaning that parents do not pay much attention to what their children are doing, thus youngsters can freely do whatever they want without worrying about being scolded or grounded. Students who think negatively, for instance with school, family, future career may also result in stress, pressure and the desire to free themselves.
There are a few actions could be taken to prevent this problem. The most efficient solution is family must educate their children to understand fully about the drug and the harmful effects, which plays an important role in forming the right mindset in students. If the student have already taken it, family still hold an undeniable position as a place where they could rely on, be encouraged, and share all their thoughts. Since the young Ecstasy consumer will suffer from emotional problems, such as depression, lack of motivation, bouts of mania. Furthermore, it is crucial for the government to conduct a survey or a test in the whole country to know exactly about the situation among high school juniors. As a result, both students and parents will always be alarmed and not be able to take a chance using this drug. In addition, the whole society can also reach out a hand in order to help prevent this issue, for example, spreading news, knowledge to raise awareness, helping the consumers to quit and change themselves instead of laughing or ignoring. All such efforts will eventually contribute to preventing society's problems and decreasing the dramatic increase.
In conclusion, students are facing serious issues regarding Ecstasy consumption and there are many causes for this, both subjective and objective reasons. Preventing the use of Ecstasy is not only the job for an individual but also the role of the family and whole society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...of mania. Furthermore, it is crucial for the government to conduct a survey or a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, still, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2229.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 442.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04298642534 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59906603294 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0517843665 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.117647059 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329079071815 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905049552278 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597366295352 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183182007092 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499342396646 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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