It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our life.
How could robots be used in the future?
Will this development be a positive or a negative trend?
It is generally acknowledged that the demand for robots is going up, therefore, the lifestyle starts to depend more and more on the technology industry. With great expectations for the next few years, these innovations may simplify or even make a revolution in some life sectors, such as education, health, transportation or even parenting.
Starting with the prognosis, smart machines are becoming noticeably developed. Although they are nowadays used in public transport and medicine, where those assist at important surgeries, a considerable amount of changes are still expected. For example, robots taking the teacher’s place or replacing the cashier in the nearby grocery store sounds idealistic, but might happen just in a couple of years.
Moreover, the robotic sector started to be essential for highly digitized countries like Japan or Taiwan, which worldwide showed how important this sphere is for people and how positively their life can change. Many reports show that the eastern asian countries achieved a higher productivity rate because of focusing on actual important tasks and leaving the usual ones to machines, which one more time proves that these days everything is possible thanks to the digitalisation.
To summarize, the overall well-being can be guaranteed by robots in the future. And although there are reasonable disadvantages and fears associated with this subject, the benefits substitute them. Furthermore, investing in technologies like such can change the view about life and work in general. So, that being said, it is definitely a highly profitable charge for a high-quality life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.528 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.985415214 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7326411248 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.636363636 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225623632646 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784651300567 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730139655869 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122503317625 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483460193245 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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