The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants.
The bar chart and pie chart delivers information about the amount of attendants of several evening classes taught at an educational center for adults in 2009, in both genders, and the ages of these learners.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the number of female participants exceeded those of male learners in most courses, with Sculpture being exceptional. In the same year, participants who were above 50 years old accounted for most of class attendants and people aged under 20 were the least relevant.
According to the bar chart, there were 40 women attended the Language course, which was the most significant number of learners in all classes and in both genders. By contrast, this figure of women stood at 5 people in Sculpture course, which was only a half of male attendants.
In the pie chart, it is clear that people who aged 50 and over contributed for 42% of class attendants while this figure of young peple who were under 20 years old accounted for only 5%. Furthermore, learners in 40-49 age group and others who aged 20-39 had the relatively similar proportion of 26%.
- It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening Do you agree or disagree 89
- The map below shows the future plan the Biology school in a particular university Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- Some think that printed books are not necessary in the digital era because all writing can be stored electronically Others think printed books still play an important role Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- Mobile phone and the internet could have many benefits for old people However this age group uses technology the least What are the benefits for old people of using mobile phones and the internet How can we encourage them to use this new technology 73
- Some people believe that in order to improve educational quality we should encourage students to make comments or even criticism of their teachers but others think it will lead to the loss of respect and discipline in the classroom Discuss both views and 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92146596859 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67095768718 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570680628272 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.6148655162 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.285714286 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283872222093 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133421976294 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1213421067 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192949152416 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13108321618 0.0819641961636 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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