The increasing use of computers and mobile phones has had a negative effect on young people’s reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or diagree?
In modern society, demand of using computers and mobile phones is increasing rapidly and affect bad to people especially the young about reading and writing skills. in my opinion, I partly agree with the statement.
On the one hand, due to the development of technology, it is inevitable that computers and mobile phones play an important role in humans’life currently. Those devices may help students to study in an effective and convenience way. For example, some students who live in far distance from school can study online easily, or search studying sources faster. Another reason is improving some necessary skills for students. For example, small devices like mobile phones can be seen as a mini book for students to improve their reading skills, or it can be a dictionary supporting students’writing skills for purpose. Specially, there are a large amount of sources in the Internet that students can easily access and will not worry about the shortage.
On the other hand, because of the successful of technology, some people spend too much time on it. According to some health newspapers, using devices over the limited time can affect to people health, especially their visions. With students, when they have bad visions, it is difficult for them in reading and writing. Furthermore, there are some fake sources which can make students confuse about the information they have. Moreover, digital devices can affect our brains and make us hard to aware of our lives whether it is true or not. To specific, those devices can control our emotions that somtime we will suddenly angry, or easily depress. Those reasons affect to students’results and studying qualities.
In conclusion, there are currently still some advantages and disadvantages of the appearance of digital devices in our life. Personally, I agree with using digital devices for the young because of its worthy and convenience. However, I hope students can aware of the bad effect of devices and use it in an effective way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14373088685 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85337325124 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525993883792 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7681577819 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4444444444 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166740672638 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055462743137 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762668743146 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141074684244 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100885430191 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.