Nowadays people are living in a “thrown-away” society where they use things for a short time and then throw them away. What cause this and problems it may lead to?
These days, consumers have gotten into the habit of using a product for a short time before disposing of it away, and this tendency is a major concern for all countries. Various reasons leave behind and I think that the main result of this trend is degraded environmental awareness and the help of mass media.
There are several causes explaining why consumers throw products away for a short time. First and foremost, it can be seen that it is a consumerism strategy of companies and businesses when they take advantage of the development of technology and the exploitation of mass media to advertise their products. They also produce mass goods that are low quality and inexpensive to encourage people to buy more to increase their sales. As a result, people can purchase affordable but not durable items. For instance, children’s toys are easily fragile after falling twice or three times, so their parents may buy new ones in lieu of mending or recycling. Furthermore, humans have a higher standard of living nowadays, so they are willing to spend money on what they need without environmental awareness and product function.
It seems to me that the main results of overconsuming and thrown-away products are wasting habits, overconsumption, and environmental degradation. Firstly, consumers may develop the habit of wasting which leads to a crisis in balancing their finances. Many teens are being burdened with thousands of dollars in credit card debt for their unnecessary purchases, which could lead to depression and anxiety. Nevertheless, discharging non-biological products can cause harm to our environmental quality when the more rubbish people throw away, the more affected environment suffers from. Due to the excessive production of disposable goods, huge amounts of hazardous waste are being discharged into the environment, which directly contaminates soil and water.
To conclude, throwing away products after using them for a short time is creating tremendous issues in our society. This essay discussed how a lack of awareness among users and high prices of goods gives birth to pollution and puts water animals in danger.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 756, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, may, nevertheless, so, for instance, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26822157434 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95073115305 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606413994169 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.41205985 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.466666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2847983638 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916215880208 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847578715105 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170452609023 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02546312282 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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