people aim to achieve a balance between their work and life but few people can achieve it
It is believed that work and lives can not be balance but balancing work and lifes is still the goal that people want to achieve. There are some reasons lead to this situation and can be tackled by some methods.
On the one hand, balancing work and lives is hard because of several reasons. First of all, a day has 24 hours and no one is exceptable. Especially in busy life, the load of work is much bigger that lead to people doing over time for complete the task. Therefore, they may have not enough time to enjoy their lives. Another reason is the development of technology, which makes people easily to work anywhere and anytime. For example, a simple phone still has almost fuctions like a little computer, which helps individuals do their work in a meeting of friends or families. Therefore, this may make people much focus on having done their business task instead of talking with friends or family in the meeting.
On the other hand, a balace between work and lives can be achieve by some solutions. On top of that is time management skill. If people know how to separate the certain period of time in a day for only work, they will have the rest of the day to do anything that make them relax, such as watching televison, listening to music and hanging out with friends. Furthermore, disciplines are also an optimal method. If they make the rules about not work while having fun with friends or family, they may not be distracted with the workload they have to finish, which makes them pay attention to communicate with other people. Therefore, this can help them reduce stress from work and balace their lives.
In conclusion, work and lives hard balance by some reasonable causes but this objective can be achieved by some aforementioned approaches.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...people know how to separate the certain period of time in a day for only work, they will have ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68167202572 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46009077237 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524115755627 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8824979908 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299552859643 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988000405423 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892888734346 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196930072792 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349507649164 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...people know how to separate the certain period of time in a day for only work, they will have ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68167202572 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46009077237 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524115755627 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8824979908 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299552859643 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988000405423 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892888734346 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196930072792 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349507649164 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.