As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that businesses only concentrate on finding money and do not care about society, but other people believe that businesses also have social responsibilities. In my opinion, I totally agree with the above statement.
On the one hand, I agree that businesses must make money to maintain their company in order to serve many purposes such as employee salaries, buying facilities to improve buildings, or enhancing service quality. On top of that, companies must make money to invest in producing innovative products. if an enterprise can’t make money, the company will go bankrupt. Moreover, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial health.
On the other hand, a company should not concentrate on making money, they should make an investment in society. spending money for society not only gives advantages for society but also helps advertise their businesses, the results is the company's profits are increasing day by day. For example, in Vietnam, Vingroup always spends 25% profit to construct free houses for poor people and the homeless. I believe that when other companies also doing this job, it contributes to social and businesses will be happy when do something good work.
In conclusion, I hope that all the company making a profit as well as have social responsibilities to the world to develop more and more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: If
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Suggestion: Spending
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23788546256 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85984865071 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590308370044 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6455984861 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.090909091 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295398802845 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108100586054 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688127858029 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188210349771 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382248543727 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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