Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles, others think there are other better ways. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
Nowdays, accident in highway steadily increasing. Some resident considering that one of the best method to accentuate mount of victim from this situation by decreasing limit of fast level transportations, however another resident assumes that many methods more effective to wiped out bad condition on way. I will discuss both of this view by my own idea.
Firstly, rule of some country controlled by government and all of wisdom decided based on the instruction. Seeing how collisions constantly occur along way make government demands to take the best policy for handle this matter and the good alternative is giving announcement to not driving transportations swiftly because it is the big cause in accident, the consequence is many people died on way. For instance, in Japan, the government determined to all inhabitants who live in there for driving slowly and don't bringing transportation onto 60 km/hours. From this policy highway in this country being convenient and stable and rate of accident more slightly.
On the other hand, instead of giving warned to all driver, another method to cope it through official regulation about awareness during driving on way. In other words, all people should be free from alcohol if want to driving because someone in drunk condition have bad insight and they are can't focus to drive. This warn must be obtained by all resident and giving sanction to people contra with this decision. As illustration, in Korea, drunk was became custom in there even almost place provide alcohol, nevertheless, after drunk they are stricly prohibited to driving their transportations, they are will get some fine or stay in prison for few mounths. Therefore, every single person obey with this rule and as a result rarely accident due to guzzler.
To conclude, regulation and policy of safety society during driving transportation on way is depend where we live and how the government handle it to decreasing percentage of accident in highway.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...condition have bad insight and they are cant focus to drive. This warn must be obtai...
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Suggestion: become
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.171875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87744291592 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5835776775 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.307692308 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140735551851 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479654279717 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432604977253 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857910994226 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143137619789 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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