Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they
should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the salad days of millennium, a number of parents believe that when children reach a certain age, they should live by own, while others think that they should remain living with their family. The upcoming fragments would shed light on both the approaches before making a final note.
To commence with the first notion, there are myraid things to be shared in its favour. First and foremost, many parents encourage their children to move out when they reach their early twenties because it make them mature and independent. This type of culture is common in western countries such as USA, UK and Canada. Some move to a different place after get married or having a new job, so that they can get a new start. Moreover, parents don't like to interfare in their youngsters because they are adult enough to have their own decisions.
Shifting towards second school of thought, in many nations for instance India and China, people like to live in joint families. In that way, three generations can live under one roof and it make their family bond stronger as well as support each other in their ups and downs. Futhermore, young adults can take care of their parents as they get old with time and unable to do basic chores. Owing to over population and scarcity of land, it is hard to owning a house, so people stay under one roof as a joint family.
Having discussed the arguments and counter arguments, I would like to infer that parents should encourage their young adults to move out or stay with them on basis of culture and economy as both are beneficial in their own way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65714285714 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27277588074 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6369525438 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256116322384 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871272730718 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725873277611 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169423876902 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444949527325 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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