Nowadays, some people like to live in big cities while other argue life in countryside is much better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In modern era, it is perceived by many that living in big cities is good whereas some people debate that life in rural area is extremely better. Both these views will be fully discussed in the essay along with my person point of view.
On the one hand, people suppose that life in urban areas brings a number of advantages namely conveniences and good facilities as well as infrastructures. As for the former, youngsters have more opportunities to develop themselves in metropolises. Firstly, they can approach a good education due to the fact that there are a lot of schools as well as universities for them to choose. For instance, students are able to make a decision by choosing a best university which is suitable for them to develop their knowledge and skills. The other point which also need to be considered is that because of improvement of facilities such as wide streets, huge bridges, citizens can travel easily in urban regions.
On the other hand, some people prefer living close to nature such as rural regions. Indeed, it is important to mention about two reasons which human should live in countryside such as good health and peaceful life. Concerning the first, human individuals can realize that their health is improved significantly after some months living in areas which are surrounded with plenty of trees and fresh air. Indeed, mankind cannot find these value things in big cities while abundant of vehicles travel on crowded streets. For example, elders have a tendency to live in rural regions because they like the atmosphere when living there. Concerning the second, it’s so quiet in regions which are far from big metropolises. As a result, people can find peace there
In conclusion, I tend to support the former opinion because I prefer to having more opportunities in improve my life such as studying to acquire more knowledge.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...are able to make a decision by choosing a best university which is suitable for t...
^
Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'?
Suggestion: have
... the former opinion because I prefer to having more opportunities in improve my life s...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, so, well, whereas, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96815286624 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70889405895 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550955414013 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2164792334 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232730643372 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751182497759 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648378938356 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141068450126 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101572098827 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...are able to make a decision by choosing a best university which is suitable for t...
^
Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'?
Suggestion: have
... the former opinion because I prefer to having more opportunities in improve my life s...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, so, well, whereas, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96815286624 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70889405895 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550955414013 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2164792334 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232730643372 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751182497759 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648378938356 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141068450126 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101572098827 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.