Some people think that the government should ban dangerous sports. Others think that people should have the freedom to do any sports they want.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some individuals believe that the government must ban extreme sports, while others think that people have the right to play any sports they prefer. Personally, I do believe that it is human’s freedom to practice what they want, even playing dangerous sports.
On the one hand, extreme sports should be banned by the government in order to protect citizens’ health and safety. Most people are not aware of what they are doing. They watch the athletes on television and want to try. Many extreme sports, such as skateboarding and mountain climbing, involve high speeds, while others like ice skating, or skiing are sometimes performed in bad weather conditions. Although players who join in those sports participate in a strenuous training course are in good health, it also exists that the unknown risk of injuries or even the ability of fatalities is still high enough whenever they perform. Hence, it is necessary that the government ban those dangerous sports.
On the other hand, others’ opinion is that it is basically personal preferences when people determine to do such activities. For many professional athletes, they find it dull to participate in conventional activities. However, enjoying those extreme sports, which include intense physical activities, stimulates players’ ability to solve real-life problems and gives them a feel-good experience. In other cases, individuals who aim to test their physical abilities and mental capacities may choose extreme sports as a new experience because it can satisfy their needs.
In conclusion, I, myself, encourage people to have complete freedom to play any sports they want to engage in, and the government should not control their decisions to maintain people’s rights.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38461538462 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79096842629 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59706959707 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7689066542 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381816456826 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128968508518 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106999697726 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251098931115 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965508405779 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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