You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric
power dam.
Write at least 150 words.
The guide shows how the town transformed from a little town to a greater business town somewhere in the range between 1990 and 2010, mostly because of the development of a hydroelectric dam.
In 1990, the town was more modest and the waterway went through the center. The east of the waterway had farmland, while the towns were further away. The north and south had houses and farmland, and mountains were encompassing the town. In the southwest, there were uncommon plants and creatures, old designs in the north, and a mountain range in the south. There was likewise a woods toward the northwest of the riverbank.
Notwithstanding, by 2010, the town had developed with the expansion of a hydroelectric dam found north of the stream, which isolated the town from a lake. The dam was contained by two mountains on the two sides. Electrical cables were worked close to the stream, and just the townhouses stayed immaculate. Moreover, another inn with a perspective on the lake was inherent in the upper-east corner of the town.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a wood' or simply 'woods'?
Suggestion: a wood; woods
... range in the south. There was likewise a woods toward the northwest of the riverbank. ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90285714286 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82178117146 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531428571429 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2026118555 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113715592964 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431113326365 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452353644918 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901665021538 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428394926923 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.