Mobile phones and the internet are very useful for old people. However, this section of population is the fewer user of mobile phones and the internet. In what ways can mobile phones and the internet be useful to the old people? How can the old people be enouraged to use this new technology?
Nowadays, cell phones and internet are helpful for older people. While, a very little phones and internet was being used by this age group people. This essy will discuss how phones provide them security and it can be taught with the help of their young ones and by making applications according to their needs.
To begin with, the use of cellular phones and web can definitely led old people to enjoy their life despite of their physical appearance. They are feeble and it is not possible for them to move most of the times but with the phone and technology they can order as well as travel anywhere on the internet. On the other hand, this provide safety to our old people. In the busy schedule people do not have enough time for old ones to take care. But mobiles can connect to both of them at any time. For example, many children had connected their parents and their phones to check out the movement of them, in case they were apart from them.
By teaching older people how to acquire the technology it would be beneficial for them. This can also be done by making different mobile application accessible to this part of public. Many people are uneducated and have no knowledge to access these things but applications in their local language with self teaching methods can really encourage them to use such facilities. For instance, talk to me feature of mobile phone and Google assistant are the best examples of how this section could be encouraged to use web and cell phones.
In conclusion,old people can help with the phones and technology for their security and letting them to use technology, industry should develop applications to promote the use of mobile phones among the old.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ording to their needs. To begin with, the use of cellular phones and web can d...
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... times but with the phone and technology they can order as well as travel anywher...
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... to this part of public. Many people are uneducated and have no knowledge to acce...
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...ure of mobile phone and Google assistant are the best examples of how this sectio...
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...se web and cell phones. In conclusion,old people can help with the phones and tec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73063973064 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42288589057 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52861952862 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5080817942 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.357142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463594100587 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170490027319 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820030789997 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315371077939 0.151304729494 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405642083075 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ording to their needs. To begin with, the use of cellular phones and web can d...
^^
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... times but with the phone and technology they can order as well as travel anywher...
^^^
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to this part of public. Many people are uneducated and have no knowledge to acce...
^^
Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ure of mobile phone and Google assistant are the best examples of how this sectio...
^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , old
...se web and cell phones. In conclusion,old people can help with the phones and tec...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73063973064 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42288589057 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52861952862 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5080817942 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.357142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463594100587 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170490027319 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820030789997 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315371077939 0.151304729494 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405642083075 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.