College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
As they say, College life is the turning point and also an important part of a student's life. This is the time the student takes the most important decisions of the student's carrer. A lot many times students get exposed to different ideas through their friends, relatives, family, social media and so on during making these decisions which can confuse them.Hence, a student should think properly and conciously while making such decisons. Following one's passion and pursuing a carrer in the same field would turn out to be beneficial for a student rather than running for a high paying job.
A student should always explore his or her liking during their school and college days. These crucial times help the student in knowing in which field the student is good and is enjoying it. For example, a student may like playing football and can be good at it, but he would get to know his football skills only when he plays football and gets quiet exposed to it. Similarly, a student may like singing pop music but he would get to though this only by listening pop music and gaining some knowledge to it. Hence, exposure to various fields in the growing ages like school and college can really help a student in deciding the right carrer for him or her.
An enjoyment factor should also be considered when a student is doing a job in any field. The more the student will enjoy it the lesser he would fell it like a burden. Even parents should take care of the fact that their child is not feeling a burden of the field he is working in. A boy forced to pursue engineering by his family members and society pressures is not enjoying his college lectures would turn out to be an underperforming student, eventually a bad engineer. Instead if the boy has a liking in pursuing dentistry, he would certainly enjoy his classes as well as would enjoy the time he would spend using the dentistry tools. Pursuing a carrer of one's liking would certainly turn out to be beneficial for the student rather than entering into a field due to external pressures.
As there are the advantages of choosing a carrer of one's interest, there are also some cases where this decison might turn out to be a wrong one. As new fields are emerging in the market and a student can practically pursue a carrer in any field, there are certain fields which are getting less importance than earlier due to advancements in technology. This is the era of Artificial Intelligence, which is trying to rule the world because the computers are turning out to be smarter than humans. ChatGPT is the best example to describe this as a recent survey showed a list of jobs which are in danger due to this revolutionary AI chatbot. Many jobs are slowly getting eaten up due to this chatbot. Thus, a student should always be aware of his or her surroundings and should always be updated and one step ahead before choosing a carrer.
Thus, it is always beneficial for a college student to choose a carrer in his or her liking rather than a high paying job which can turn out to be a disaster if the student has no interest in it.
- College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain y 66
- The following was written as a part of an application for a small business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise Currently the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away thus 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...g point and also an important part of a students life. This is the time the student take...
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Line 2, column 358, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
... these decisions which can confuse them.Hence, a student should think properly and co...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'factors'.
Suggestion: factors
... carrer for him or her. An enjoyment factor should also be considered when a studen...
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Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pursuing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: pursuing
...he field he is working in. A boy forced to pursue engineering by his family members and s...
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Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...ing student, eventually a bad engineer. Instead if the boy has a liking in pursuing den...
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Line 5, column 662, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...e dentistry tools. Pursuing a carrer of ones liking would certainly turn out to be b...
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... the advantages of choosing a carrer of ones interest, there are also some cases whe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, really, similarly, so, thus, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2539.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 555.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57477477477 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47064019677 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43963963964 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 782.1 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1753367417 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.409090909 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2272727273 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220192209046 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812345694285 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443690940525 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156361008192 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379082241983 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.8420337079 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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