People continue to recommit crimes even after being penalized for their wrongdoings. Why do you think this happens? How can crime be stopped
There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over the fact that people have intention of committing crimes again even after serving their sentences. This essay is dedicated to the underlying roots and followed by some equivalent solutions.
Without a shadow of a doubt, there are a wealth of justifications related to this phenomenon. One of the primary reasons is the unacceptability in society so the criminal’s background serves as a barrier for them to reintegrate. Due to the difficulty in seeking jobs, perpetrators can not make a living or support themselves financially after release. Consequently, they find it easy to earn money by doing wicked acts. For instance, in Vietnam, recent research shows that the ratio of misdemeanors such as burglary, pickpocketing, shoplifting,.. has increased over the past five years. Hence, a lack of money for survival can make a great contribution to reoffending crimes of lawbreakers.
While the reasons for reoffending crimes are widely acknowledged, there are multiple means to stop offenders. The government should cooperate with some enterprises to offer job opportunities for criminals who are unemployed after reintegrating. For example, prison inmates will have a chance to participate in some vocational orientation classes while serving their sentences. After being released from prison, they will have a stable job offered by some companies. Therefore, the state needs to take effective steps to prevent wrong-doers from recommitting crimes.
In conclusion, there are various reasons why lawbreakers keep on repeating violent acts so it is imperative for the government to have proper remedies to this pressing issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n to reoffending crimes of lawbreakers. While the reasons for reoffending crimes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56589147287 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30854311512 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5594994003 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240679859482 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634727113808 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454440156029 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125574446393 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03217654846 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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