In some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life.
What do you think are the reasons for this development?
Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
In some nations, couples want to be born children later in life. In my opinion, I consider this trend is becoming popular because of the increasing expectations of people toward life, which could be most beneficial to individuals and the community as compared to the demerits it might bring.
To commence with, there are two paramount reasons behind this trend. Firstly, both men and women want to secure their future and live before taking such important steps as giving birth. To explain, nowadays, due to lifestyle has become expensive, giving birth to a child might affect the finance of the family. As a result, people are working hard for a certain period to make sure that couples are now able to bring new family members. Another vital reason behind this trend is that today's generation believes that they are not mature enough in their early twenties to bring a child into their life, so both men and women spent some quality time together to understand each other better and ensure that they now become enough mature to give birth.
On the one hand, there are manifold benefits to having late kids. The first and foremost advantage of it is individuals can have sufficient time to build their vocation and fulfill their dreams and craving in their premature state of life, as they do not need to concern about the children's lives. For example, women are dominant in professional jobs as compared to the past when they just used to do household chores. Furthermore, another advantage of this trend is that bringing up the child may be like a silver spoon because before childbirth parents' financial conditions are much better to bring a child into very good situations.
On the other hand, it might have some drawbacks which can not be neglected such as a generation gap between parents and pupils, which might lead to less communication between them. In addition, both have different thought processes and beliefs because these conflicts might have occurred between parents and juveniles. Secondly, most females who give birth to their children in their late thirties are likely to face some inimical problems regarding health. To illustrate, the lack of fitness and immunity in ladies' bodies in later years might create detrimentally problems like more labor pain and, the mother having to do surgeries to carry out the child from the stomach.
In conclusion, in my opinion, there are certain reasons behind the trend such as financial security and healthy relationship which consider merits but there are some harmful impacts on women's health, and parents' relationships with kids, both problems should be improved through healthy conversation and advanced health amenities.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 485, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
... vital reason behind this trend is that todays generation believes that they are not m...
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Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hild from the stomach. In conclusion, in my opinion, there are certain reasons...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2254.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 444.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07657657658 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53678800878 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531531531532 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.9 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.3841284121 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.875 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6875 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23248992605 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753923724306 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393361128049 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124914902304 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449261980573 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 485, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
... vital reason behind this trend is that todays generation believes that they are not m...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hild from the stomach. In conclusion, in my opinion, there are certain reasons...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2254.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 444.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07657657658 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53678800878 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531531531532 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.9 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.3841284121 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.875 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6875 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23248992605 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753923724306 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393361128049 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124914902304 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449261980573 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.