A nation should require all of its students to study the the same national curriculum until they enter college
Studying same subject in inital stage of life have its pros and cons. I don't agree with the author on the topic that all students need to study same subjects till they enter the college. A national wide curriculum would have disadvantages more than its advantages.
First, few core subject like English, Maths, History, and so on should be manditory for the students to learn in the school. This will help them to make a strong foundation for the futher subject they want to study. English is the most common language which is spoke around the world and learning it would help the students to communicate easily with any person from any part of the world. Maths is use in day to day activity and understanding the concepts of it will surley help the students. Maths is basic subject for many other subject like programming, accounting, problem solving,etc. History is taught in school so, that the stduents knows about their past and the mistakes which have cause an event to happen in past and how to avoid it.
Along with these core, mandetory subjects, the student should have a choice to choose the other subject which he/she wants to learn or have interset in it.
Allowing the student to choose the subject of thier own choice will help them to gain more knowledge about the field in which they wants to make their futher. If the student already knows what are the basics of the subject and are focus on what they want to purse in life, than the choice of subject would surely help them to become master in their field. Lets us understand this by an example.
If a student wants to do mechanincal engineering, than he would select subject like, thermodynamics, fluid mechanism, engineering drawing, and so on. He/ She would not choice subject like biology, civics, accounts which have no relation to their field of choice or interset. These same could be done if a student wants to study medicine than they would omit subjects like maths and physics. They would focus more on subjects like biology, chemistry, pshycology.
If their is a national wide curriculum than the students are force to study the subject which they don't like or subjects which have nothing to do with the field in which they are going to make a career. All the students have some strengths and weakens. So, if a student selects subject which are his/her strengths than there are less changes to make mistake or regret later in life. If a student is force to study a specific subject which he/she don't like than they would not have any motivation to study that subject and they would only study it to pass the subject.
I am not saying that there should not be some common subject across the nation, but having a same curriculum until college would have more disadvantages than advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2288.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 486.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70781893004 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39907460129 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.427983539095 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 691.2 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0411467069 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.818181818182 5.21951772744 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234105409411 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840275511609 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758717485916 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151280008455 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102187616583 0.0667264976115 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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