Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person.
Why do you think this is the case?
What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Today’s technological society, children tend to overuse social networks instead of getting in touch with people in real life. I believe that is an urgent situation we all have to deal with.
It would be worrisome that teenagers are excessive use of social media and this case starts from a few reasons. Firstly, parents seem to be busy these days and they don’t have time for their children so they let them play with electronic devices from a very young age. And this creates bad habits for kids to be likely addicted to social networks. Secondly, in demand of a fast society, children have to multi-task to complete their duties. For example, kids have many courses to study, many groups to join and all are on the internet. They don’t have to really live in reality. Finally, social media has some benefits for teenagers that we can deny. They can make friends online or keep in touch with cousins easily. Instead of hanging out in a cafeteria, they would like to meet up on Messenger, discord… which are much more economical.
In my opinion, information exchange face to face is a key to how society works. There are some solutions to encourage kids to raise their initiative in contacting people in reality. Parents have to set rules for their kids using electronic devices. Children are allowed to be online at a certain time a day such as no phone on the dinner table, no chatting online before bed, using only 30 minutes at relaxing time. Family and school are responsible for spending more time with children or students. They should take kids outside, go camping frequently in order to enjoy fresh air and to meet up with people. In addition, last but not least, parents should encourage children to invite friends to their house for an outdoor barbecue, playing sports and even for dinner.
In conclusion, for a healthy generation, for the future of the nation, people would consider that overusing social networks is a troublesome case. Pressing measures are necessary.
- Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person Why do you think this is the case What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person Give reasons f 84
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- Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person Why do you think this is the case What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person Give reasons f 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86803519062 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53352407702 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571847507331 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6673266904 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.05 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117736237605 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035786387743 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324176002056 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059752695019 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453636916544 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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