The best way to improve the quality of education in a country is to increase teachers’ salaries.
Inquiry-based learning and academic integrity are the most important pillars of each society in today’s world. Due to the fact that we live in a competitive and fast-paced world, it is vital for schools to utilize their facilities with overqualified teachers. A controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether schools should increase teachers’ wages or not. Some people possess the conviction that it is not an economic decision for schools’ budget whereas I think, increasing the teachers’ salary is more beneficial which makes the learning rate improves. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is that increasing salaries will improve teachers’ motivation. As teachers spend more time with students when they feel dissatisfied will affect their teaching style and consequently, students’ learning rates will decrease. On the other hand, when they feel happy with their salaries, they put their heart into the task at hand, make an agreeable atmosphere in classes and the learning rate will increase.
The second rational reason behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that salary satisfaction will reduce teachers’ concerns and issues, which keep their minds busy during classes. The most important thing is that when teachers don't agree with their salaries, they start overthinking the worth scenario, or they should take secondary jobs besides teaching. Physical presence at classes solely, will not help students in their tasks and more important, academic integrity. Thus, salary satisfaction is important. Consider my personal experience to make this point more clear. One of my friends is a great teacher in elementary school. He is so humble and patient with children. Many years ago, he had some financial issues which affected his endurance and tolerance level. He started overacting with children. When He explained his circumstances to his manager, his wadge improved and he felt better and acted normally in his class.
In brief, due to the aforementioned reasons, it is critical for schools’ pedagogy to increase the teachers’ salaries because it will improve teachers’ motivation and reduce concerns. It is anticipated that if teachers feel amiable in their classes, their performance will increase and eventually the learning rates will increase, which will make schools famous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, if, regarding, second, so, thus, whereas, i think, in brief, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2112.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51436031332 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89937405988 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556135770235 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.632000722 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.15 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153646727518 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548107286861 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708236514376 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113382098996 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03969328142 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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