Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
People have different views about which place is the best to live in. Some of them think a house-life is better than an apartment-life. While there are several benefits of residing in a house, advantages an apartment offers are far more greater.
On the one hand, there are a few reasons why people prefer to live in a house, one of which is a larger space. It is obvious that houses usually contain a bigger area compared to apartments, being comfortable for extended families and giving an opportunity to those who love gardening. Another beneficial side is that houses are more pet-friendly, which can be sometimes forbidden in a flat by the owner. For example, If people like looking after a dog, house is the best option for them as they can even build a kennel which is often impossible in an apartment.
However, I agree with those who are in favor of living in an apartment. The main benefit of this is affordability. Apartments are often more affordable than houses, making them an attractive option for individuals or families on a budget. Furthermore, maintenance is a responsibility of landlords, which makes an apartment more convenient to the residents since if something breaks down, people living there can have them fixed with just a call to the owners. Additionally, there is flexibility in apartments that people can change it when their workplaces are changed or feel bored with the same scenery, that can be more difficult with houses.
To conclude, despite some benefits of living in a house such as a sizable volume and pet-welcoming, it seems to me that cost-saving and convenient apartments are more preferable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, so, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94945848375 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97957528234 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545126353791 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5743204578 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.461538462 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464163074948 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15109338335 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716846914919 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288963472205 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760328388685 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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