Many shopping malls around the world are being closed as people now prefer to go shopping online rather than going directly to shopping malls. What are the reasons for this? What results it may have?
In mordern society, many people tend to buy stuff on the internet instead of going shopping at mall. Because nowadays buyers could shop easily by technology. As a result, Mall centres or retailer stores could disappear and those are being replaced by shopping online habit in near future. In this essay, I will explain the causes and the effects of that.
There are many benefit which make customers transform to shop on the internet. Firstly, purchaser who select buying online would save substantial time. People spent only approximately five or ten minutes to book the goods on the internet, instead of wasting a lot of time for go to the mall, choose the product and get in line to pay the bill. Furthermore, Customers have time to research specifically about the product. when clients order on the internet, every merchandises which producer put up on the website always show about the price, technology specification, size, origin. Staying at home, buyers could find out easily many features of the goods before purchasing.
Shopping malls are being closed, which change the traditional business and affect shopping habit of clients. In traditional business, the malls or stores are a place which customers go and buy directly. But If shopping online develops more and more, those are being replaced by exhibit stores and businessman could cut down the labor expenses. Stores only show the catologues of products or testing products, it is not the main contribution places. Moreover, when the majority of stores are being demolished, the purchase habit of everyone might change. Online shoppers trend to stay at home and order on the internet, they could not control purchasing habit. Therefore, there are many risks when they buy over the financial limited or buy what do not needs.
In conclusion, there are many causes and effects, but there is a fact that all changes in economic or business bring the best experience to the clients such as the speed and convenience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many benefits'.
Suggestion: many benefits
...s and the effects of that. There are many benefit which make customers transform to shop ...
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Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...esearch specifically about the product. when clients order on the internet, every me...
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Line 5, column 753, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'need'?
Suggestion: need
...he financial limited or buy what do not needs. In conclusion, there are many cause...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05792682927 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63353757363 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564024390244 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7621291119 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280985146984 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084435582343 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792363346822 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164179918241 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106272889122 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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