The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters traveling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2030

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters traveling each day by car, bus, or train between 1970 and 2030.

The given graph gives information about daily traveling by vehicle in the UK from 1970 to 2030.

Overall, the numbers of car and train commuters increase gradually over the period shown, meanwhile, bus sees a decline in trend. Cars are seen as the most popular means of transportation.

In 1970, there were over 5 million people who drive in the UK, compared to 4 million people traveling by bus and 2 million rail passengers. The fall in the commute trend of buses and the uptrend in rail travel made an overlap in 2015, at around 3.5 million commuters. In the same year, cars reached over 7 million in the number of its users after a significant rise in 2000.

After 2015, growths in the trends of cars and trains continue and are expected to reach new peaks of 9 million and nearly 5 million, respectively, by the year 2030. In contrast, the number of bus users is predicted to drop to just under 3 million in the same year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... 2 million rail passengers. The fall in the commute trend of buses and the uptrend in rail ...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55621301775 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54210714619 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603550295858 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2114940875 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257404615412 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113786530682 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576719241197 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167636500542 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408750641102 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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