Writing letter to an airlines manager
Dear Sir or madam,
I am writing to you to explain a situation that happened during my last flight journey. I was travelling from Bangalore to Singapore in your airlines on 28th May 2023.
During the journey, we were offered some sandwiches and cool drinks. so, I requested the flight attendant to serve healthy food for my 1.5 years old son as he is not used to junk food, although, the attended rejected my request as well as she insisted that only the food served by them will be the last and final and there will not be any changes in the menu.
I suggest, you to modify the menu based on the customer’s request. As everyone cannot eat the same dishes which you offer. I recommend you add a small portion to the menu for babies and toddlers like milk, bread, fruits, egg etc. which will be of a great use for customers like us. I believe that you will consider my request and I hope to see the changes during my next flight.
Kind regards,
Sandy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ffered some sandwiches and cool drinks. so, I requested the flight attendant to se...
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Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e menu based on the customer’s request. As everyone cannot eat the same dishes whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42696629213 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3260869437 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651685393258 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1509800359 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0323576492049 0.216113520407 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0142238924527 0.0766984524023 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285838229593 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0376626775986 0.12726935374 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532630694552 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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