People are responsible for their happiness. Others feel happiness depends on other factors in their life. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
People are often conflicted while discussing the source for their happiness, as some people tend to agree with the fact that happiness lies within the person making the person himself accountable for his joy, while a certain group of people argue that our happiness is a product of various contributing factors in our life. In my opinion, both of these statements stand true, and depend entirely on the grounds upon which they are compared upon. The following writeups zeros in the matter of debate.
People are emotional beings and are often influenced by the surroundings they live in, as a person's perspective of joy hugely depends on how he/she perceives the world. Studies have shown that, a person who grew up in a strict household where competitive nature is fostered tends to find lesser delight in small victories, as the person constantly compares his achievements to people who have come before him. Moreover, it is also true that a person's colleagues and partners have a fair share in their happiness because he who has a supportive environment has someone to share his minor wins, which in-turn makes a person likely to be happier.
On the other hand, a person's perspective and view of life also has a greater impact on their happiness. Some people are by default sadistic in nature and try to keep themselves occupied in their hardships, while others have a nature of always looking at the brighter side. It has been seen, these tendencies in people are mostly included by birth and are one of the defining traits of a person which can not be changed by any influence. Studies have shown, being happy and staying jolly, though involuntary, are often decided by a person subconsciously, which makes a person responsible for the choice of their own happiness.
To sum up, being happy and seeing brighter things in life though highly debated is a person's choice, yet that choice can be influenced by various factors including the people surrounding them. In my opinion, to make someone happy a better mentality and a supportive environment are both the requirements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...their happiness, as some people tend to agree with the fact that happiness lies within the person making...
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Message: You should probably use 'zero'.
Suggestion: zero
...e compared upon. The following writeups zeros in the matter of debate. People are ...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... by the surroundings they live in, as a persons perspective of joy hugely depends on ho...
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Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... to be happier. On the other hand, a persons perspective and view of life also has a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, while, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95156695157 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72388512349 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529914529915 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0162521118 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.833333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.25 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283408724732 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103288930571 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074919348652 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183759473687 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711994369792 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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