It's okay to lie online
By virtue of the frequent use of Internet, there is a tendancy for network users to tell a lie, which is argued whether it is acceptable or not. While no one can deny its own merits, this may come at the expense.
On the one hand, lies apparently make up art which has an important role to play in our lives. This means with taking advantage of untruths, authors are able to think out of the box and produce piece of art. For instance, plentiful works of fiction available on the Internet are giving a picture of fantasy world built by lying and exaggeration. Nonetheless, they all offer readers new insights into rule-breaking things as well as broaden public horizon rather than lead them to erroneous ways of thinking.
On the other hand, lying on network sites, namely chat room, forum is considered directly linked to the spread of fake news as it bends the truth and mislead the public. In fact, people in the digital age are easily exposed to censored information in the Internet where many stories are deliberately told in order to influence individuals' views. They as a consequence are more likely to be brainwashed; moreover, they might hold on the belief against the society and even become reactionary.
In conclusion, despite some favorable points, it goes without saying that lies on the Internet ought to be restricted due to their potential drawbacks.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2023-06-09 | Nguyen Hai Dang | 56 | view |
| 2023-06-09 | Nguyen Hai Dang | 56 | view |
| 2023-06-09 | Nguyen Hai Dang | 56 | view |
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- It s okay to lie online 56
- It is reckoned that making mistakes is inevitable and can be a valuable growth experience for teenagers To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- It s okay to lie online 56
- It is reckoned that making mistakes is inevitable and can be a valuable growth experience for teenagers To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea Use specific reasons and examples to support your answ 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83474576271 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68389643195 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694915254237 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7177321952 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.1 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111492947796 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411027569069 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041252681414 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654259630917 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146770504069 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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