In some countries, the government encourages businesses and corporations to move from major cities to regional areas. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Nowadays, some countries tend to motivate the movement of business markets from metropolitan cities to regional zones. Though a lot of drawbacks to this trend, this shift can boost the extension of the markets and job opportunities for villagers.
The evidence proves that this trend brings back a lot of great conveniences in that it may remove the reality of unemployment. In other words, when moving to rural areas, businesses and corporations are likely to have a big demand for the number of employees, helping country dwellers with stable incomes and working near their homes. Hence, this thing not only contributes to the economic development of the countryside but narrows the distance between the rich and the poor. Another reason is that the markets can be extended. Building new industrial complexes and site in the countryside can reach a great number of consumers, enhancing the efficiency of business activities. Also, this can lead to revenue growth, which can assert the position of the business.
However, the inexperienced employee is one of the glass ceilings for risk-averse investors. If they accepted people not specializing in this job, they would have to spend much time providing training courses until they can be proficient at the job. Thus, this can impact negatively on productivity as well as the process of production. Besides, an existential risk making businesses hesitate is attributed to poor infrastructure. The infrastructure including the internet, electricity is not completely developed, so moving businesses can cause high freight costs. Moreover, hardships in contacting clients in urban areas can arise, boring them on their arrival to examine the production of factories.
In conclusion, while there are plus points to moving businesses to regional areas, too much would arise as a result. Resolving immediate drawbacks should be prioritized to attract businesses and corporations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46333333333 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07168249227 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.572494202 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2149871052 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628603744223 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600050505245 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138797076483 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633068153272 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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