Many people think that museums and galleries should only show work from local artists rather than work from other countries. Do you agree?
Some people claim that work from local artists should be displayed at museums and galleries more instead of national works. Despite the benefits of this view, I believe it can have consequences in the process of cultural integration and development.
Those who agree with the view that government should only show work from regional artists consider it a good way to support the development of artistic value in their country. Moreover, only displaying native paintings can spread folk art to teenage, which leads to the youth in the present time having a passion for folk paintings and being conscious of preserving and developing them. However, limiting shows to only local artists’ work results in the audiences can feel bored and having few chances to approach the world art scene.
On the other hand, the opponents think that only showing local artwork can limit the opportunity to experience and discover foreign’s cultures. For example, some countries such as Korea, Japan, and China often held cultural fairs to show their culture, and artworks from their countries are one of them. Besides that, a national exhibition also promotes tourism development by attracting more native and international tourists.
In conclusion, although prioritizing local artwork can increase the creativity of the artists and enhance the value of the country's art, the balance between showing both local and national artworks can bring more benefits.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ore native and international tourists. In conclusion, although prioritizing loc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35087719298 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69279672484 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.7530973839 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.555555556 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316281258217 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127596546473 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109367894317 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181634569104 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548831491988 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Some people claim that work from local a...
^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cultural integration and development. Those who agree with the view that gover...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ances to approach the world art scene. On the other hand, the opponents think t...
^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore native and international tourists. In conclusion, although prioritizing loc...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35087719298 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69279672484 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.7530973839 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.555555556 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316281258217 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127596546473 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109367894317 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181634569104 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548831491988 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.