It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives.
Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?
It is argued that taking risks, both in terms of individual’s private life and one’s working career, determined by the opportunity to achieve extraordinary success. While there are various disadvantages to this development, I firmly believe that the advantage outweigh the benefits.
On the other hand, taking risks involves a certain level of uncertainty and potential for failure. In both personal and professional domains, there is always a chance of experiencing setbacks or financial losses. For instance, starting a new business venture entails financial risks and the possibility of business failure. Moreover, in personal relationships, taking emotional risks can lead to hearbreak or disappointment. These potential disadvantages may deter individuals from taking risks and opting for a more secure and predictable.
On the contrary, despite the potential disadvantages, the advantages of taking risks are substantial. Firstly, taking risks allows individuals to step out of their comfort zones and explore new posibilities. By pushing boundaries and challenging oneself, people can unlock their true potential and discover hidden talents or skills. For instance, individuals who take the risk of pursuing a new career path may find greater fulfillment and professional satisfaction. In addition, taking risks is often a catalyst for personal growth and development. When individuals confront challenges and overcome obstacles, they build resilience, self-confidence, and adaptability. This personal growth not only enhances their overall well-being but also equips them with valuale life skills that can be applied in various areas of their lives.
In conclusion, while taking risks may have potential disadvantages, the advantages far more outweigh the drawbacks in order to unlock their potential and make significant positive impacts in their lives and society as a whole.
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- It is important for people to take risks in both their professional lives and personal lives Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages 78
- It is important for people to take risks in both their professional lives and personal lives Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84115523466 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27568344738 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584837545126 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8753972498 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.866666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466088561321 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148841684427 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779518904116 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255942231359 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735113491202 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.59 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.