The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
There is a belief that the most significant goal of science is to improve people's lives. From my perspective, I am totally in agreement with this viewpoint for the following reasons.
Since the advent of science, people's working life has been significantly improved. Firstly, science, in particular, computers and AI (artificial intelligence) are adapted in workplace to support white-collar workers mentally. To be more specific, computers are frequently used to manage and store a huge amount of data alongside with handling time-consuming and heavy workload such as calculating and office stuffs. As a result, employees do not have to do spend time doing complex tasks, as opposed, they can time relieving stress. Secondly, science is indispensable in blue-collar workers' life. In other words, there are more and more machines invented to cope with dangerous and physical-demanding tasks. As a consequence, workers are not obliged to do dangerous tasks, hence, they can have more time relaxing.
Another point that should be mentioned is that science plays an important role in people's medical health. Specifically, since the appearance of science, more people pay attention to their health. Consequently, the number of people surviving from chronic diseases such as cancer and diabetes is decreasing compared to the past. Take Vietnam National Hospital as an illustration. This hospital has been adapting science to their patients' treatment. Thanks to cutting-edge technolgy, major of patients are recorded to have recovery from their illnesses. Finally, science is now increasingly applied to human's health. Many people use apps and machines to follow their health as well as their diet and resting time.
In conclusion, science is undeniably important in improving human's well-being. Not only is it always considered an indispensable part in blue and white's collar life but it is vital in improving people's mental and physical health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 581, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
...science is indispensable in blue-collar workers life. In other words, there are more an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47333333333 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08239445165 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0834586381 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4210526316 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7894736842 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47368421053 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150621271559 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483650681107 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389966126089 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104913602676 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403252948047 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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