The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. Write a summary paragraph for the above diagram.
The picture illustrates the process of coffee manufacture and preparation for sale on the market.
Overall, there are 11 stages in the production of coffee. The process begins with the collection of coffee beans by farmers and ends at the packing stage.
Looking at the coffee production process in detail, coffee beans are collected in the field. These beans are then allowed to dry under the sun for several days. After that, these seeds should be roasted and cooled before being put in a grinding machine. The resulting powder is mixed with hot water, and the mixture thus obtained is strained by a strainer.
In the following step, the strained mixture is frozen and then passed once again through the grinder to form a liquid. After that, it is placed in a vacuum to remove the remaining water in the mixture. Finally, the dried vacuumed powder is packed into coffee jars for delivery to shops.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, look, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29192546584 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.15142059281 2.65546596893 232% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.1234903836 43.030603864 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.4545454545 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118698370719 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472632586824 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068550322899 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765934136773 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795056671582 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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