The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Leadership skills are very important aspect in any field be it government, industry, or any other fields. The growth of a particular team is very much dependent on the leader. I believe best way for a society to prepare young people for leadership is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
It is very important for a team leader to be cooperative rather than competitive. A leader is responsible for guiding, managing and success of the team. So, it is very crucial for a leader to be cooperative. For instance: In a cricket team, if the captain is not cooperative, but competitive with other players. There will not be a unity in the team, which may lead to competition within the team. If a captain is competitive with the players in his team, then he can never appriciate other team members or encourage them to play well, which may result in losing the game. Not only that, if a leader is not cooperative with the players in his team, it will be difficult for the team to play together and win the game.
Consider a political leader, one of the most important qualities of a political leader is to cooperate with the common people. For instance: Suppose there is a political leader who is not at all cooperative with the people and doesn't consider people's issues. There will be quarrel among the people and also the leader.
Competition might be important in some cases but not everywhere. For example: Suppose there are 2 teams working together for a same project and only one team will be selected based on the results. In this case the leaders of both the teams should be cooperative with the team members of their own team, at the same time they should be competitive with the other team in order to get selected.
To conclude, a sense of cooperation is an important quality of a leader, be it a cricket team or a political leader. A healthy competition is required when two leaders or teams are competing against each other but not within the team.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'believe the best'.
Suggestion: believe the best
...is very much dependent on the leader. I believe best way for a society to prepare young peop...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... at all cooperative with the people and doesnt consider peoples issues. There will be ...
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Line 7, column 394, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he other team in order to get selected. To conclude, a sense of cooperation is a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, then, well, for example, for instance, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 353.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65155807365 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75756301706 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42492917847 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.789277187 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2222222222 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24177986439 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105216057564 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125736687661 0.0758088955206 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169053454177 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122834600148 0.0667264976115 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.