It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives.
Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?
With life changing fast, people have more tasks to complete. Therefore, in some cases, they have to face the risks in order to obtain their desideration.
Recently, there is a school of thought that regardless of any part of their life, people ought to involve themselves in the risks. It is quite hard to determine whether the benefits of facing the risks overwhelm the demerits or not, given that it depends on various reasons and I will discuss it in the following paragraph.
When it comes to the advantages, it is worth mentioning that if somebody takes risks with a plan and considering the possible success rate of the thing they do, the outcome is likely to be fruitful. For instance, recent research indicates that if scientists do a deadly experiment to invent some useful stuff with a success rate of 50:50, most of them will take the risk. Another remarkable point is that some risks are worth it, even if the consequences may not live up to your expectation. For example, if you notice a conflagration and you come to rescue people, you can be wounded or even die but you will be praised and your effort is invaluable. Were you to stare and just stand there, you would have repent.
On the contrary, taking risks may bring drawbacks in certain circumstances. First, some people take risks for no driving force, just to seek attention, they can wound themselves or even commit suicide. Second, in order to earn money, many people face the risks irrespective of the terrible consequences.
Those who oppose this view may put forward that many people involve themselves in risks without any calculation, they still succeed. However, this view seems flawed as nothing is eternal and people can not be successful forever.
To sum up, taking risks is a double- edge sword, it depends on the way you act. Personally. I will take risks if it is probable and I recommend people to adopt the similar.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'repented'.
Suggestion: repented
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in some cases, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81570996979 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65209996628 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552870090634 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1306155764 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287518502094 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991847822904 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615669408154 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148088385313 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689238600907 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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